പ്രളയത്തിനുമിടയില്
ഒരു ചിരിക്കും
കണ്ണീരിനുമിടയില്
ഒരു ചോദ്യത്തിനും
അതിനുത്തരത്തിനുമിടയില്
എത്ര ദൂരം?
അറിയില്ല...
പക്ഷെ...
ആ ദൂരമാണിന്നെന്റെ
മൗനം...
Transliteration
Oru pranayathinum
pralayathinumidayil
Oru chirikkum
kaneerinumidayil
Oru chodhyathinum
Athinuththrathinumidayil
Ethra dooram?
Ariyilla...
Pakshe...
Aa dooramaninnente
Mounam...
Translation
Between a love
And a deluge
Between a smile
And a drop of tear
Between a question
And its answer
How long will be the distance?
Not sure...
Yet...
This restraint is my response!
Sindhu Jose
(Translated by the author)
Notes:
1, The word "Mounam" in the last line of the poem cannot be exactly translated as restraint. The word conveys a certain sense of silence, but does not exactly mean lack of sound. In excercising "mounam" the person also excersises his or her own will. The word can also connote a sense of an unwillingness to "act" and is much more pregnant in meaning than silence.
അതിനുത്തരത്തിനുമിടയില്
എത്ര ദൂരം?
അറിയില്ല...
പക്ഷെ...
ആ ദൂരമാണിന്നെന്റെ
മൗനം...
Transliteration
Oru pranayathinum
pralayathinumidayil
Oru chirikkum
kaneerinumidayil
Oru chodhyathinum
Athinuththrathinumidayil
Ethra dooram?
Ariyilla...
Pakshe...
Aa dooramaninnente
Mounam...
Translation
Between a love
And a deluge
Between a smile
And a drop of tear
Between a question
And its answer
How long will be the distance?
Not sure...
Yet...
This restraint is my response!
Sindhu Jose
(Translated by the author)
Notes:
1, The word "Mounam" in the last line of the poem cannot be exactly translated as restraint. The word conveys a certain sense of silence, but does not exactly mean lack of sound. In excercising "mounam" the person also excersises his or her own will. The word can also connote a sense of an unwillingness to "act" and is much more pregnant in meaning than silence.
3 comments:
Very nice...however, I feel the core of the poem might have been lost in translation (this, as we know, remains the problem...)
i think the last two lines should read: "that distance be my silence"
Thanks Elika...
And you are right kaatib that the last two lines should read so...Still I feel like something is missing...
Thank You...
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